Websites Your views needed please

You had me at the home page. Nice design and photography using. The website is relaxing and very uniform (no sudden changes in style). Most personal websites do not have Costumer Reviews. VERY GOOD IDEA. It makes me want to use your sevices. Small detail: "I would thoroughly recommend her facials, they are amazing and I always come away feeling ten years younger!!" Should not have double exclamation point. Also try to use a different font for subtitles.

 

looking good! might say the colours are a tad to bold? maybe a lighter pink?
my opinion

 

Not a bad site really. The purplish background colour is a bit bright, sort of like the like red, which strains your eyes as you look at it.
The text could be a bit brighter I think.

 

I think first one is better, second looks nonsense...

 

<title>Nikki’s Beauty Treatments</title> (25 characters)

Google allows 66 characters (including spaces) you may want to add some more information
including keywords

<meta name="description" content="Nikki’s Beauty Treatments is a in home, full service beauty
therapist, serving the Milton Keynes area." /> (102 characters)

Google allows 150 characters (including spaces) you may want to add some more information
including keywords

Good that you have the area in the description

Information on hot stone massage
http://spas.about.com/od/hotstonemassage/a/Hotstone.htm
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hope this helps
falcon

 

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<meta name="description" content="Nikki’s Beauty Treatments is a in home, full service beauty
therapist, serving the Milton Keynes area." />
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Keywords checked using:
http://www.keyworddiscovery.com/search.html

beauty 17,898
Treatments -
treatment 221
full 2,151
service 3,475
therapist 310

just some suggested keywords
cosmetic 141
massage 31,215
facials 427
facial 7,402
manicures 51
manicure 2,064
pedicures 130
pedicure 328
esthetician
skin 1,335
care 473
health 54,889
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hope this helps
falcon

 

See pg3 #43

Problem - each page needs a unique title (see Google's description)

Changing your site's title and description in search results - Webmaster Tools Help

Home <title>Nikki’s Beauty Treatments</title>
About <title>Nikki - Professional Beauty Therapist</title>
Clients <title>Nikki’s Beauty Treatments - Satisfied Clients</title>
Treatments <title>Nikki’s Beauty Treatments</title>
Price List <title>Nikki’s Beauty Treatments</title>
Contact <title>Nikki’s Beauty Treatments</title>

suggestions:
Treatments <title>Nikki’s Beauty Treatments, facisle, cleansing, masque, massage</title>

Price List <title>Nikki’s Beauty Treatments, price list; waxing, eyes, make up</title>

Contact <title>Nikki’s Beauty Treatments, contact by phone or email</title>
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hope this helps
falcon

 

Still needs work on your title and description (every page, not just one or two), also your keywords.
Keywords need to be checked, as sometimes plural words are more popular than singlular and vice versa.
Also simple replacement or minor changes can make a big difference. Your main title and description keywords should be repeated within the first 100 words of the body. Search engines are digging deeper into the web page now looking for relevance between content, title and description.
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hope this helps
falcon
P.S. thought I would be banned by now (you have the power)

 

Looks like "Sid" in "Ice Age" when he was the "god of fire".

 

Good website, homepage shows you exactly what the site is all about and the option tabs are clear and highlighted.

 

A very professional looking business website, clear and concise pictures and text, easily navigated and all relevant information needed to hand. Felt like booking a stone massage session myself , best regards, Tom