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Websites Updating old site - Almost ready to go live

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by ishkey, Jul 14, 2009.

  1. ishkey

    ishkey Moderator, Logos, Sports Crests Staff Member Verified Member

    I've been so busy with everyone elses sites that my core site has been neglected. Many have told me it has taken a nose dive and that it needs a remake. Really it needed a major overhaul.
    If anyone cares to to take a look and maybe let me know where I went wrong or did ok, please by all means do so, because the upload date is just around the corner.
    here's the link to it's home...
    http://cleandeck.net/

    Thanks David
     
  2. It looks great, i really like the header :D
    Although, you might want to change the background ;)
     
  3. ishkey

    ishkey Moderator, Logos, Sports Crests Staff Member Verified Member

    thanks, but I'm still having problems on my photo page, trying to load some galleries.
    they work on my server down here but not when I load on to the web server.
    What color background did you have in mind?
     
  4. deyounggerry

    deyounggerry New Member

    I noticed one typo on the home. one which could withstand the abuse and harshness that farming has upond the equipment.
    On your testimonials:
    Bill From: Oak Brook IL
    I had some spray left in the can from when I used it on my mower. So I sprayed my snow shove. Nothing sticks to it pushing the snow just got a lot easier.
    Beyond that everything looks great.
     
  5. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

    According to "HTML Tidy"
    Source code:
    Line 11 - meta element not closed
    Line 38 - Col 43 <img> element not closed
    Line 43 - Col 569 <img> element not closed
    Line 43 - Col 706 <img> element not closed
    Line 43 - Col 847 <img> element not closed
    Line 43 - Col 976 <img> element not closed
    Line 43 - Col 1096 <img> element not closed
    Line 47 - Col 372 unescaped & (s/b &amp;)
    Line 79 - Col 134 <img> element not closed
    Line 106 <img> element not closed
    Line 118 - Col 90 (s/b document.write("<\/h1>");

    <title>Clean Deck</title>
    You should ad a short description to the title
    using keywords
    Google displays about 64 characters including spaces

    <meta name="description" content="CLEAN DECK - Is a
    specialty graphite dry lubricant coating to reduce
    corrosion and eliminate clogging in grass cutting
    equipment and many other tools." />
    Google displays about 150 characters in the
    description listed under the title

    <meta name="keywords" content="clean deck,
    lubricant, paint, environmentally friendly,
    graphite, lawn, mower, undercoating, deck,
    clean, tools, home, garden, commercial,
    residential, snow removal equipment, pine
    wood derby, grease">
    You should add "graphite dry lubricant" or
    "graphite dry lubricant coating" also
    "corrosion" and "High Performance graphite lubricant"

    I ran your site through a web page analyzer
    This is the result:

    Keywords:
    You do have Meta-Tag Keywords in your site. These will help your sites positioning
    in the search engines.
    PROBLEM SOLUTION
    You are using your keywords ineffectively. You are only using 201 characters when you can
    use up to 1000. We suggest that you simply add some more keywords into your Meta-Tag
    Keyword list. The Keywords you are currently using are listed below. For more information on
    Keyword Meta-Tags Click Here.
    You are not spamming your keywords, they will be accepted by the search engines
    Your Keywords Are:
    clean deck
    lubricant
    paint
    environmentally friendly
    graphite
    lawn
    mower
    undercoating
    deck
    clean
    tools
    home
    garden
    commercial
    residential
    snow removal equipment
    pine wood derby
    grease


    Title:
    PROBLEM SOLUTION
    You are using your Title ineffectively.
    You are only using 10 characters when you can use up to 100. We suggest that you use a
    few more words in your TITLE Tag, and try to use your main keywords if possible. For more
    information on the Title Tag Click Here.
    Your Title is:
    Clean Deck
    You are using your keywords within your Title effectively, you are using 3 of your
    keywords in your Title.


    Description:
    You are using your Description effectively
    Your Description is:
    CLEAN DECK - Is a specialty graphite dry lubricant coating to reduce corrosion and eliminate
    clogging in grass cutting equipment and many other tools."
    You are using your keywords within your description effectively, you are using 6 of
    your keywords in your description.

    Body:
    You are using your Keywords as follows in the body of your page:
    clean deck 17 times Good, do nothing
    lubricant 5 times Good, do nothing
    paint 0 times Add to your web page text
    environmentally friendly 1 time Good, do nothing
    graphite 10 times Good, do nothing
    lawn 13 times Good, do nothing
    mower 20 times Good, do nothing
    undercoating 1 time Good, do nothing
    deck 21 times Good, do nothing
    clean 22 times Good, do nothing
    tools 6 times Good, do nothing
    home 6 times Good, do nothing
    garden 2 times Good, do nothing
    commercial 1 time Good, do nothing
    residential 2 times Good, do nothing
    snow removal equipment 0 times Add to your web page text
    pine wood derby 0 times Add to your web page text
    grease 4 times Good, do nothing
    You are using your keywords within the body of your page effectively, you are using
    15 of your keywords in the body of your page.


    File Sizes:
    Home Page 11.75Kb
    http://david.cleandeck.net//images/blank.png 0.02Kb
    http://david.cleandeck.net//images/type_lawnmowers_and_tractors_m anual-reel-mowers.jpg
    0.02Kb
    http://david.cleandeck.net//images/type_lawnmowers_and_tractors_e lectric-push-type-mowers.jpg 0.02Kb
    http://david.cleandeck.net//images/type_lawnmowers_and_tractors_g as-powered-mowers.jpg
    0.02Kb
    http://david.cleandeck.net//images/type_lawnmowers_and_tractors_l awn-tractors.jpg 0.02Kb
    http://david.cleandeck.net//images/type_lawnmowers_and_tractors_z ero-turn-radius-mowers.jpg
    0.02Kb
    http://david.cleandeck.net//images/ordernow.gif 0.02Kb
    http://david.cleandeck.net//images/1046666mower2-main_Full.jpg 0.02Kb
    Total 11.91Kb
    Your File Size is good.


    Download Time:
    Time Taken To Download
    On A 56Kbs Modem 3.43 Seconds
    On 128Kbs DSL 1.50 Seconds
    On 512Kbs DSL/Cable 0.38 Seconds
    On 1024Kbps DSL/Cable 0.19 Seconds
    Your Download Time is good.

    hope this helps
    falcon
     
  6. ishkey

    ishkey Moderator, Logos, Sports Crests Staff Member Verified Member

    Thanks deyounggerry - fixed errors. usually my typing is really bad.
    navyfalcon - alot to fix, thanks.
     
  7. bmcoll3278

    bmcoll3278 New Member

    I think it looks good I love the header image.
     
  8. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

    This information is for all readers of this forum:
    What 'Google' says about "meta tags"
    http://www.google.com/support/webmasters/bin/answer.py?answer=35264&topic=8522
    -
    The title: Google displays about 64 characters, including spaces
    -
    The description: Google displays about 150 characters, including spaces
    -
    The keywords list - is for you to list the keywords you optimized the page for
    - make sure the keyword you use is the same as listed - word and words are not the same. Do not list empty keywords (words that are not used in the title, description, and/or body) they do not help.
    Make sure you check the keywords in a keyword suggestion tool such as wordtracker
    http://freekeywords.wordtracker.com/
    also get their free keyword information
    What do I do next with these keywords?
    http://www.wordtracker.com/usingkeywords/?source=freetool
    and check your page in a webpage analyzer
    http://www.creatingonline.com/site_promotion/website_checker.htm
    check your page in a validation tool, such as HTML Tidy
    http://infohound.net/tidy/
    -
    hope this helps
    falcon
     
  9. bmcoll3278

    bmcoll3278 New Member

    The only problem I find is html tidy gives warnings for anything in java script or any link with & in it
     
  10. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

  11. ishkey

    ishkey Moderator, Logos, Sports Crests Staff Member Verified Member

    Well thanks to all. Took a lot of tweaking, looking, fixing and listening to what others had to say.
    It pays to keep your site fresh, listen to others and watch your stats.
    My Bounce Rate is down to 35.69%
    New Visits are up 159.67%
    Avg. Time on Site 13:44 minutes
    Pages/Visit 6.91
    In every catagory the site is up.
    With more tweaks it should go up more.
    Even the conversion rate to sales have increased.
    Again thanks to everyones input here and the emails.

    Dave
     
  12. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

    You need to add these words to the body or remove them from the keyword list
    paint ............................0 times ..Add to your web page text
    snow removal equipment ..0 times ..Add to your web page text
    pine wood derby .............0 times ..Add to your web page text
    small engine repair ..........0 times ..Add to your web page text
    -
    hope this helps
    falcon
     
  13. WpBlogHost

    WpBlogHost New Member

    Hi Dave, it's John (previously eVentureBiz).

    Those are some excellent stats. Your bounce rate is really low and the average time on site is awesome. Nice job.
     
  14. ishkey

    ishkey Moderator, Logos, Sports Crests Staff Member Verified Member

    Hey Hey it's the WordPress Master.
    Good to see you back and thanks for the high praise.
    Hope everything has been going well for you out in Gambling Land.

    The site is really going in terms of revenu and the stats ain't bad either. How about your Hosting Site. Bet you are just sitting back and enjoying life.

    Dave
     
  15. ankitmehta

    ankitmehta New Member

    I think it looks great!
     
  16. WpBlogHost

    WpBlogHost New Member

    ishkey my buddy. Coming back to these forums brings back memories, just my 270 posts are now back down to something like 4 LOL.

    I actually have a new site design coming out for our site. I hired out a designer/coder to build a site for us. I think he missed the mark when it came to getting in touch with our target audience so now I've recreated the site with my own design view and now I have a coder implementing it. The basic idea is in the Website Review area, but I've changed a few things since then.

    Anyway, I like your site redesign over your last one.

    So obviously you are bringing in targeted traffic. What kinds of marketing do you do?
     
  17. CovertPea

    CovertPea Moderator Staff Member Verified Member

    Hey John -
    I can see your site is fairly graphic intensive but is took 24 seconds before it finished loading.
    Might be just me (or some potential customer) but that's a heck of long time to wait around.
    Anyone else have the same load time?

    CP
     
  18. ankitmehta

    ankitmehta New Member

    Cool header by the way!
     
  19. WpBlogHost

    WpBlogHost New Member

    CovertPea, I assume you're talking about our current site?

    That is a long time to load. I suspect it might be a WordPress plugin hogging up some resources and am taking a look. But our new site is almost completed which should load much faster.

    Thanks for the heads up.