Websites Tough search keyword.

Hi I could use some critique as far as SEO on one page on my site. I recently redid it for the search term stun gun. It is a very competitive term and any advice you can give is very much appreciated. http://www.proselfdefenseproducts.com/stungun

Thank you in advance.

 

www.submitexpress.com gives you advise aswell as current % as in how good, title, content, description, keywords etc goes.

 

Thanks DJ. I looked at the site but as we are a new site, it just isn't in the budget to hire someone to do this work for me. I have worked on it myself and figured there are others in the forum with more experience than me. I was just hoping to get some advice as to what I can do better.

 

<title>Stun gun | Don't like firearms? Buy a stun gun from $19.00 and up.</title>

<meta name="Description" content="Buy a stun gun at Pro Self Defense Products. We feature,
talon mini, Z force, The Runt, cell phone stun gun, hot shot, and many others at more
affordable prices than our competition. Walk safe, feel safe, be safe with your own stun gun.
We have the best quality available.">

<meta name="keywords" content="stun gun, cell phone stun gun, stun gun distributors, buy a
stun gun, flashlight stun gun, talon stun gun, self defense products, rechargeable flashlight,
cell phone, baton, flashlight, self defense, personal protection products, batons, firearms,
guns">
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What about this article ??
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Electroshock_weapon
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hope this helps
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