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Websites Everyone Please Review Magicshoplimerick.com

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by ishkey, Jun 24, 2009.

  1. ishkey

    ishkey Moderator, Logos, Sports Crests Staff Member Verified Member

    Hey everybody the forums database is a little messed up and Mimoun is absent for personal reasons so it can not be fixed right now.
    Several of our members can PM but not post.
    Please have a look at this site from the message that was PM to me from our member
    b1977c


    Thanks everyone for your understanding.
    b1977c - I not sure how you are going to respond back.

    ishkey...
     
  2. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

    note: validation warning line 68
    <a> attribute "id" has invalid value "567" The attribute ID is of type ID. As described above, it should begin with a letter and have no spaces
    [​IMG]<a id="567" href="/index.html"> [​IMG]<a id="n567" href="/index.html"> <img> attribute "width" has invalid value "740px" HTML width and height attributes do not need "px"; their units are always assumed to be pixels.

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    the page seems split to me (the top to the left side and the bottom on the right side)
    using firefox with 800 x 600 resolution
    may want to check with "browser shots"
    http://browsershots.org/
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    hope this helps
    falcon
     
  3. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

    May want to change the title a little

    <title>The Magic Shop, Limerick > Costumes & Fancy Dress ></title>
    50 characters, including spaces in the title -
    Google displays about 66 characters, including spaces
    May want to add about 16 characters describing your site

    Examples:
    <title>Magic Tricks .Com - FAST SHIPPING | Magic Shop for Magicians | Magical History,
    Library of Magic, Magicians Museum</title>
    they seem to have an excess (should only use a short description using some keywords)

    <TITLE>Brad Burt's Magic Shop - The best magic shop for magic books, tricks and videos</TITLE>

    <title>Barry&rsquo;s Magic Shop, Serving the Magic Community Since 1974</title>

    <title>Magic tricks, Books, Card Tricks, Close-up magic, coin tricks, DVD&amp;#180;s - The Magic Shop</title>
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    hope this helps
    falcon
     
  4. djwilson

    djwilson New Member

    In IE8 goes to the left.
     
  5. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

    the page seems split to me (the top to the left side and the bottom on the right side)
    using firefox with 800 x 600 resolution
    may want to check with "browser shots"
    http://browsershots.org/
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    It may have something to do with the tables
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    <td width="50%" align="left">061 341839<br />
    086 2563681<br />
    087 6492126</td>
    <td width="50%" align="right">6 Mallow Street<br />
    Limerick<br />
    Ireland</td>
    </tr>
    </table>
    </div>
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    hope this helps
    falcon
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    (PM me and I'll post the reply)
     
  6. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

    I don't know what you did, but it looks a whole lot better
    Did you correct the problems with Google ??
    Loads a little slow, may want to compress the pictures (all zip or compression programs are not created equal). Many free programs that will help, try several and use the one that works best for you.
    Much better on my browser (800 x 600 - using firefox)
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    hope this helps
    falcon
     
  7. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

  8. CovertPea

    CovertPea Moderator Staff Member Verified Member

    Great links Falcon, thanks for adding! :rolleyes:
     
  9. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

    I want to see that piece of string that caught your attention
    falcon
     
  10. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

    I don't believe "looks nice" is a post.
    I want to give a post the way I want to receive one
    Here is a general outline:
    - - -
    website review guidelines

    Aesthetics & Eye Appeal
    Personality:

    1. Does the site's look and feel seem to match the subject matter
    2. Does the site align visually with the intended reader or market?
    3. Do you immediately get a sense of what the site is all about?
    4. Could you easily see "About" and security information?

    Design & Layout

    1. Are the graphics appropriate to the subject of the site?
    2. Are the graphics appropriate for the intended audience?
    3. Are there graphics that seem superfluous or unnecessary?
    4. Is the color scheme appealing and suggestive of the topic?
    5. Is the layout cramped and 'too full' or is there proper spacing and visual rest areas?
    6. Is your eye drawn to the most important elements? Do they then relate into the content?

    Reader Usability

    1. Is the site understandable?
    2. Did you know what to do to get to the information you wanted?
    3. Were there guide posts or 'help' features included
    4. Are the areas of content clearly defined
    5. Were there distractions like spam and blinking ads
    6. Are there visual elements, design elements, pictures, or content blocks that are distracting, or that keep you from flowing into the content message?

    Functionality

    1. Is navigation Intelligent, logical and clearly understandable
    2. Does the technology work - Java, scripts, movies, etc. or are you required to load a program or do something in order to use the site?
    3. Do buttons and links send you where you expected to go?

    Page Source

    1. Does the title have a brief description (max 66 characters including spaces) and does it include the most important keywords
    2. Is the description clearly understandable and does it match the site (max 150 characters including spaces) and does it include keywords
    3. Is the keyword list a reasonable length (not excessive) and have they been checked in a keyword suggestion tool
    4. Are the keywords used in the body of the page
    5. Is the page source for each page directed for that page content.
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    hope this helps
    falcon
     
  11. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

    I ran your site through a website analyzer and this is the result:
    You should check your keywords in a keyword suggestion tool such as wordtracker before determining whether to keep or remove
    http://freekeywords.wordtracker.com/
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    hope this helps
    falcon
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    Keywords:
    You do have Meta-Tag Keywords in your site. These will help your sites positioning in the search engines.
    PROBLEM SOLUTION
    You are using your keywords ineffectively. You are only using 186 characters when you can use up to 1000. We suggest that you simply add some more keywords into your Meta-Tag Keyword list. The Keywords you are currently using are listed below. For more information on Keyword Meta-Tags Click Here.
    You are not spamming your keywords, they will be accepted by the search engines
    Your Keywords Are:
    fancy dress
    Magic
    Shop
    Limerick
    jokes
    tricks
    cards
    cheap
    great
    fun
    costumes
    make
    up
    dvd
    books
    coins
    wigs
    ireland
    party
    cool
    crazy
    funny
    paint
    all ages
    magician

    Title:
    You are using your Title effectively
    Your Title is:
    The Magic Shop | Limerick | Tricks, Jokes, Costumes & Fancy Dress
    You are using your keywords within your Title effectively, you are using 7 of your keywords in your Title.
    Google displays 66 characters of your title (including spaces) - You have 65 characters

    Description:
    You are using your Description effectively
    Your Description is:
    The Magic Shop has loads of great tricks, books, costumes and much more to help you become an amazing magician! Great fun for all ages, at home or at parties!"
    You are using your keywords within your description effectively, you are using 9 of your keywords in your description.
    Google diplays 150 characters of your title (including spaces) - You have 154 characters (you may want to remove "The" in magic shop.)

    Body:
    You are using your Keywords as follows in the body of your page:
    fancy dress 2 times Good, do nothing
    Magic 4 times Good, do nothing
    Shop 6 times Good, do nothing
    Limerick 3 times Good, do nothing
    tricks 4 times Good, do nothing
    costumes 6 times Good, do nothing
    make 5 times Good, do nothing
    up 5 times Good, do nothing
    books 4 times Good, do nothing
    ireland 4 times Good, do nothing
    paint 1 time Good, do nothing
    jokes 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    dvd 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    cards 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    cheap 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    great 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    fun 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    coins 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    wigs 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    party 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    cool 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    crazy 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    funny 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    party 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    cool 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    crazy 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    funny 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    all ages 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    magician 0 times Add to your web page text or remove
    You are using your keywords within the body of your page effectively, you are using 11 of your keywords in the body of your page.

    File Sizes:
    Home Page 4.58Kb
    http://www.magicshoplimerick.com /images/index/shop2.png 0.03Kb
    http://c.statcounter.com/5034572/0/0fc38b80/1/ 0.03Kb
    Total 4.63Kb
    Your File Size is good.

    Download Time:
    Time Taken To Download
    On A 56Kbs Modem 1.34 Seconds
    On 128Kbs DSL 0.58 Seconds
    On 512Kbs DSL/Cable 0.15 Seconds
    On 1024Kbps DSL/Cable 0.07 Seconds
    Your Download Time is good.
     
  12. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

    Here is how "wordtracker" rates some of your keywords:
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    211 fancy dress
    341 fancy dress costumes
    1864 magic
    707 magic tricks
    937 shop
    Limerick
    8544 jokes
    2323 practical jokes
    998 practical jokes and pranks
    707 magic tricks
    532 mind tricks
    513 card tricks
    118 tricks
    207 trick
    1420 cards
    cheap
    great
    fun
    4767 halloween costumes
    2420 costumes
    make
    up
    2089 dvd
    books
    coins
    wigs
    ireland
    party
    cool
    crazy
    funny
    paint
    all ages
    201 magician
    1864 magic
    707 magic tricks
    937 shop
    Limerick
    8544 jokes
    2323 practical jokes
    998 practical jokes and pranks
    707 magic tricks
    532 mind tricks
    513 card tricks
    118 tricks
    207 trick
    1420 cards
    cheap
    great
    fun
    4767 halloween costumes
    2420 costumes
    make
    up
    2089 dvd
    books
    coins
    wigs
    ireland
    party
    cool
    crazy
    funny
    paint
    all ages
    201 magician
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    Note:
    211 fancy dress
    341 fancy dress costumes
    - I would use "fancy dress costumes"
    4767 halloween costumes
    2420 costumes
    - I would use "halloween costumes"
    118 tricks
    207 trick
    - I would use "trick"
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    You need to check keywords in a keyword suggestion tool
    such as wordtracker (http://freekeywords.wordtracker.com/)
    Also check the competition (other magic sites) for ideas and keywords
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    hope this helps
    falcon
     
  13. bruceree

    bruceree New Member

    No online shopping cart? Any future considerations for it?
     
  14. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

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    hope this helps
    falcon