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Hey check out this site for an adveritsing company I'm working on. its not totally complete yet but give me some thoughts. Please keep in mind its my first site...ever. The site is wjhollisib2000.com

 

A few ideas. if you know a little about php find a form mailer and install it use that in place of the email me link on the ad page. It will slow down spam a little. and lighten up the colors a little. This page looks really cluttered. http://www.wjhollisib2000.com/savings.php#listing.
I have found from asking for reviews from others that light colors always seem to get the best reviews. I am alway looking to join forces so let me know if you need any help with php to do anything interactive

 

One more idea for you go here http://php.resourceindex.com/Complete_Scripts/Images_and_Graphs/
You can find a script to display your images of sample ads as thumbnails then when someone clicks one it can show it full sized that will make the page a lot more pro and less cluttered

 

Keywords are what visitors use to find your web page
Use the best keywords that describe your site
This is what Google says about meta tags
http://www.google.com/support/webmasters/bin/answer.py?answer=35264&topic=8522

<title>Image Builders 2000</title>

<meta name="description" content="Image Builders 2000 provides advertising solutions for
small business across America" />

<meta name="keywords" content="Advertising Image Builders 2000 Flyer Website design
Marketing solutions wjhollisib2000.com Flyers" />

Are you required to display this (below) ???
<!--

Design by Free CSS Templates
http://www.freecsstemplates.org
Released for free under a Creative Commons Attribution 2.5 License

Title : Embouteillage
Version : 1.0
Released : 200800204
Description: Three-column blog design with the third column allocated for ads. Features
Web 2.0 design ideal for 1024x768 resolutions.

-->

Google displays about 64 characters in the title - you can add a short description
Google displays about 150 characters in the description
You may want to check your keywords in a keyword suggestion tool such as wordtracker
http://freekeywords.wordtracker.com/
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hope this helps
falcon" />

 

Took another look love what you did with the portfolio page looks much better.

 

I think the Black and Red and total darkness of the site has the psychological result of distrust. Just my opinion maybe.

 

I agree with deyounggerry

 

You may want to change your meta tags a little
(title - description and keywords)

<title>Image Builders 2000</title>
You have 19 characters (including spaces) in your title
Google displays up to 66 characters (including spaces) in your title
Suggest you add a short description to your title (to include your
best keywords). You can add up to 47 characters

<meta name="description" content="Image Builders 2000 provides
advertising solutions for small business across America" />
You haver 84 characters (including spaces) in your description
Google displays up to 150 characters (including spaces) in your
description
Suggest you add some more information using your best keywords
(keywords are the words visitors use to search for your site)

<meta name="keywords" content="Advertising Image Builders 2000 Flyer
Website design Marketing solutions wjhollisib2000.com Flyers" />

Be sure and check your keywords in a keyword suggestion tool such as wordtracker
http://freekeywords.wordtracker.com/

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hope this helps
falcon

 

My personal opinion

Domain name can be better you can find one here website.ws this website is great!