I need critics

What do you think about that service site. I tried to make business design, but i don't know is it Ok?

 

Hi Angela,

Few comments from my end:

Good points:

• Color theme of website looks very impressive, for this particular business, rather than trending blue or green colors
• Golden logo of website is awesome, nice and catchy.
• Good responsive try.

Not Good (can't say bad, rather say looks odd or not as per expected) points:

• Starting from main menu and its submenu font colors, should be more visible
• "Move to top" arrow is visible, while already scrolled on top, that should not be there.
• In welcome content area, Orange color is so bright, it pinches in eye, while viewing, so personally I have to scroll down quickly, to stay away from its sharpness that fleshes in the eye.
• Register/sign up area, that is very funny asking about "I'm 18 years old.". Because, you have to think, who trades this kind business as age wise, I'm sure no kids.
• And Finally, in footer area, minimize fonts for disclosure thing, put some thing like contact details, address, phone and any chat ids etc, that will help visitor to contact, if in case they like it.
• Over all, for business prospective website it misses important part contact details, that makes this site little bit fuzzy, and untrustworthy, so I suggest correct them first.
• I got chance to visit only home page, and found this issues, may be they can be more, if we research it deeply.

Hope, you have get some ideas, for betterment and actually looking for. These are my personal, open thoughts. It's up to you, and your choice, how you wanted to drive further.

Regards,
Techdesign