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Websites Please review my website design

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by muzammal, Aug 8, 2008.

  1. muzammal

    muzammal New Member

  2. pezboy45

    pezboy45 Mod/Design & Coder [Pro]

    Wow...
    Thats pretty damn nice.

    Too bad I don't text...
    I can't see anything wrong.
    You just might want a better title text thing.
    The one you have now...is sorta plain.
    But, otherwise, as a teen.
    I think it looks GREAT!
     
  3. emilypal

    emilypal New Member

    The graphics look amazing.
    Though, there is one thing which doesn't let me call your site really great. I mean too many Adds which are placed above the main content. Don't you respect your content? Why don't you show it to the readers when they enter your site. The first thing I see is a great header a lot of adds which I don't really like. I understand the importance of Adds but you could place them lover.
     
  4. pezboy45

    pezboy45 Mod/Design & Coder [Pro]

    Or, about the ads.
    When you make an account, most of them should go away...
    (and advertise that)
     
  5. eVentureBiz

    eVentureBiz New Member

    I have to agree, the Google AdWords is too big and doesn't add anything to your website. If you absolutely must have those there, make it a one line thing with maybe 3 ads.

    Your links are too light in blue; go with a darker color. For example, I can't see the word "Sign In" up at the top right because it blends with the background.

    Also, it's not quickly apparent to me what this website is about. Something about text messages and being funny? I think this needs to be explained in a clearer way.

    I don't even know what SMS is. Is it explained?

    One of the first things I come to is: A Largest Text Messages and SMS Collection

    That isn't proper English, so you might want to consider revising that. Maybe say, "The Largest Text Messaging and SMS Collection On The Web" or something.

    Then again, on the first line it says, A largest collection of Text Messages, Funny, Friendship, Love and Romantic SMS. That again is improper English.

    The site is pretty, but those are some of my recommendations. Hope you take them constructively.
     
  6. kathyper

    kathyper New Member

    well done as for the outlook and the idea is cool as well :rolleyes:
     
  7. muzammal

    muzammal New Member

    Thanks for appreciating , I really need to make some changes
     
  8. tzoki

    tzoki New Member

    it looks good...very nice style
     
  9. Sakari

    Sakari New Member

    Hi

    Its a nice site and very helpful for me. There is so much stuff for youth. Lots of SMS options. I like it. sometimes i have 0 SMS to send and my all SMS being old. this site help me so much for that time.

    thanks
     
  10. newage123

    newage123 Banned

    I agree - the design itself looks very nice
     
  11. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

    You have many validation warnings where you used double <p><p> and double </p></p>.
    Line
    46, 55, 58, 61, 68, 71, 74, 77, 80
    They should be easy to correct.
    -
    hope this helps
    falcon
     
  12. liposuctionguide

    liposuctionguide New Member

    I can't see anything wrong.
    The graphics look amazing.
    well done as for the outlook and the idea is cool as well
     
  13. muzammal

    muzammal New Member

    Thank u all guys and girls for your +ve review.
     
  14. tzoki

    tzoki New Member

    what cms have you used ? or you've build smth yourself?
     
  15. ckckckckck

    ckckckckck New Member

    very good site and lot of contents
     
  16. deyounggerry

    deyounggerry New Member

    I don't even know what SMS is. Is it explained?.... This was never answered. I also don't know. It is a nice site and I have nothing to add. You already have some real good suggestions.
     
  17. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

    First SMS means:
    Short Message Service (SMS) is a communication service standardized in the GSM mobile communication system, using standardized communications protocols allowing the interchange of short text messages between mobile telephone devices (cell phones).
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    Second: I agree with the remarks about the ads. The Google ads should be layed out better so they don't distract from the site. They are suposed to blend with the site.
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    Third: You may want to optimize you meta tags for better results.
    <title>Latest Mothers Day SMS and Text Messages | SMS Guild
    Collection</title>
    <meta name="description" content="A largest collection of
    mothers day Text Messages, New Year, Funy, Friendship, Love
    and Romantic SMS." />
    <meta name="keywords" content="mothers day,sms, funny, text
    messages, friendship, poems, jokes, dewali, romantic" />
    -
    What are you using as title when mother's day is over
    - wait until next year ???
    I suggest you use a free keyword suggestion tool.
    -
    hope this helps
    falcon
     
  18. reganstar

    reganstar New Member

    You have a very good idea. Everyone search at one moment a cool sms ! It looks very nice and simple !