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Discussion in 'Reviews' started by wadehutcherson, Feb 8, 2011.

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  1. wadehutcherson

    wadehutcherson New Member

    Hi,Im wade,this is my first website,please take a look -n- tell me what you think.Please be honest,my skin is tough,I can take it.

    wadehutch.webs.com/
     
  2. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

    I noticed your site is deep blue with white text - Good contrast
    Your ads are on the right side - Good consistency
    The bottom ad might want more information
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    SEO header
    <meta name="description" content="WWW.WADEHUTCH.WEBS.COM IS A
    SITE FOR SPORTS FANS!I FIND THE BEST DEALS ONLINE AND PASS THEM ON
    TO OTHER SPORTS FANATICS!">

    You don't need all capitals in the description
    also you need your best keywords in the description and title
    Use a keyword suggestion tool - search Google for "free keyword
    suggestion tool" or "free keyword tool".
    Example: Who will search for "Wadehutch.webs" ??
    How many will search for sports apparel or sports clothes ??
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    <title>GREAT PLAYS - HUTCHERSON INC----WORK HARD----PLAY HARD</title>
    The dashes count as characters in your title, also they do not help
    in SEO. You may want to reconsider using them. Use your best
    keywords in your title and description. Keywords are the words
    people use to find your site. Always check your keywords in a
    keyword suggestion tool.
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    is pagetracker your analytics ??
    I find it helpful to use more than one analytics
    I use Google analytics (free) and GoStats (free) plus StatCounter
    (free) and other free analytics. Google analytics also tracks your
    Google adsense. Does pagetracker track your clicky ads ?
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    hope this helps
    falcon
     
  3. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

    Sports apparel
    (some examples of sports apparel websites)
    also an example of keywords you may want to use
    be sure and check in a keyword tool

    Fanzz: Sports Apparel, NFL, NBA, MLB Apparel, NFL, MLB, NBA Jerseys and Merchandise, NHL Shop

    <title>Fanzz: Sports Apparel, NFL, NBA, MLB Apparel, NFL, MLB, NBA
    Jerseys and Merchandise, NHL Shop</title>

    <meta id="ctl00_Description" name="Description" content="Shop NFL,
    MLB, NBA, NCAA, NHL jerseys for men, women and youth. Our NFL Jerseys,
    NFL Apparel, MLB Hats, NBA Jerseys and gifts ship fast." />

    as listed on Google (title 59 characters)
    #
    Fanzz: Sports Apparel, NFL, NBA, MLB Apparel, NFL, MLB, NBA ...
    Shop NFL, MLB, NBA, NCAA, NHL jerseys for men, women and youth. Our NFL Jerseys,
    NFL Apparel, MLB Hats, NBA Jerseys and gifts ship fast.
    Fanzz: Sports Apparel, NFL, NBA, MLB Apparel, NFL, MLB, NBA Jerseys and Merchandise, NHL Shop - Cached - Similar

    Football Fanatics: Sports, Apparel, Jerseys, College, NFL, NBA, NHL, MLB, Shop, Merchandise, Fan, Gear, NCAA, Store, Clothing

    <meta id="ctl00_ctl07" name="abstract" content="Football Fanatics:
    Sports, Apparel, Jerseys, College, NFL, NBA, NHL, MLB, Shop,
    Merchandise, Fan, Gear, NCAA, Store, Clothing" />

    <meta id="ctl00_metaDesc" name="Description" content="Shop NFL Apparel,
    College Merchandise, NBA NFL MLB fan gear featuring an endless
    assortment of sports apparel &amp; jerseys, NCAA merchandise,
    clothing and sportswear for men, women and kids. Shopping for NCAA
    Football, Basketball and Baseball Gear? We have the largest selection
    of Collegiate T-shirts, Jerseys, Sweatshirts and Hats in our NCAA
    Shop with over 500 schools to choose from." />

    as listed on Google
    #
    Football Fanatics: Sports, Apparel, Jerseys, College, NFL, NBA ...
    Shop NFL Apparel, College Merchandise, NBA NFL MLB fan gear featuring an endless
    assortment of sports apparel & jerseys, NCAA merchandise, clothing and ...
    Football Fanatics: Sports, Apparel, Jerseys, College, NFL, NBA, NHL, MLB, Shop, Merchandise, Fan, Gear, NCAA, Store, Clothing - Cached - Similar
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    lost about half their description (make sure your important keywords
    appear first so you don't lose them)
    -
    hope this helps
    falcon
     
  4. wadehutcherson

    wadehutcherson New Member

    Thanks FALCON,you helped alot!Im brand new to all this.I greatly appriciate your help.Im headed there now to make changes.Thanks again-WADE HUTCHERSON:D
     
  5. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

    I noticed you use "if IE" statements
    here is some tips
    How To Create an IE-Only Stylesheet | CSS-Tricks
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    alternatives to Google Adsense
    The Top 10 Alternatives to Google Adsense
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    Alternatives to Google AdSense
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    sorry, didn't realize clicky was an analytic
    Thought is was an alternative to Google Adsense
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    You may want to check similar websites (sports apparel) and
    get some ideas from your competors
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    free website submission
    Free Web Submission: Free Search Engine Submission and Site Promotion
    -
    hope this helps
    falcon
     
  6. wadehutcherson

    wadehutcherson New Member

    Hey navyfalco thanks 4 the advice-I changed my title,but I have a question.How do I get google to recognize the changes?
     
  7. stricklygfunk

    stricklygfunk New Member

    id also like to know how google picks up the changes and how long it takes?
     
  8. albion

    albion New Member

    I'm no expert and I'm pretty sure that my feedback is'nt ground breaking but here goes.

    I like the contrast in colours as noted above. HOWEVER, I do think that by adding additional colour to the text or not typing in CAPS may by more asthetically pleasing.
    In addition to this, when you view your page with out scrolling down all you see is white text. Adding an image or banner at the top of the page maybe an idea...
     
  9. simonlarkin

    simonlarkin New Member

    That is one in your face web site.......I like it. As said before, some kinda graphic banner would break things up a bit better. Once my eyes adjusted it was easy to click around and fun... nice one

    Simon
     
  10. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

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    They spider your pages and can tell immediately by dates, by amount of text, by comparison. You can check the pages they have indexed by putting your site name in google search without the "http://www" and it will list the pages indexed.
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    falcon
     
  11. korvayne

    korvayne New Member

    Yeah im agree with most posts here,I think you need more of a banner at the top of the site and less capitals when writing.other than that the layout is good & it looks well.im no designer so well done!
     
  12. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member

    Your listing in Google

    WADES SPORTS WORLD - ST LOUIS CARDINAL JERSEYS
    Get your DALLAS COWBOYS, ST LOUIS CARDINALS,LAKERS, MISOURI TIGERS AND
    BLAKE GRIFFIN jerseys here. NFL,MLB,NBA apparel, all teams. cheap or authentic.
    www.wadehutch.webs.com/ - Cached - Similar
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    Question ? why did you repeat ST LOUIS CARDINAL
    or why is it in your title ?
    work at getting your title and description to complement each other.
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    Use a keyword suggestion tool to check your keywords
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    Check Cached in other sites. It shows keywords highlighted in
    yellow, green, blue. This helps position and pagerank.
    -
    hope this helps
    falcon
     
  13. Sergino

    Sergino New Member

    Fonts appear to be not solid. heading must be highlighted with more wide letters.
     
  14. Enclavean

    Enclavean Member

    Hi

    Instead of having the title in plain text, how about you get a fancy text logo instead?

    cooltext.com lets you generate many different kinds.
     
  15. ashdoy

    ashdoy New Member


    Nice start mate. Colour's are a good contrast. The title could do with a custom image (THE FONT IS A LITTLE BORING). Maybe ask if anyone on here could quickly rustle up a nice title page for you.
     
  16. dj johnny qwest

    dj johnny qwest New Member

    A very nice site...
     
  17. gojroberts

    gojroberts New Member

    I like the contrast in colours you've used on the website. Adding a few more images would be a good idea too.
     
  18. EMPORIASOCCER

    EMPORIASOCCER Member

    wow very excellent site. i even bookmarked it for later use
    that is a great site
     
  19. cmiles

    cmiles Banned

    Great infos there.. thanks
     
  20. beechesfc

    beechesfc New Member

    review

    i found the site intresting but found the main page a bit plain the videos are def a good idea but maybe have the videos on entering the site to buy but advertise the videos on the main page as people will come into watch, then grab them with the items you wish to sell at the same time.gd luck with this:)
     
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