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Logos Please tell me what can be improved

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by boemboem, Jul 22, 2009.

  1. boemboem

    boemboem New Member

    can anybody tell me how to improve the logo, I have made this in illustrator (the font part)

    p.s. I will buy the original one, they are indeed not expensive and royalty free for all purposes. This one is imported from a small image into a vector based program.

    Feel free to give me your ideas.

  2. unhallowedangel

    unhallowedangel Logo Specialist

    Its very nice :) You know, you do have some very good skills with logo designing.
  3. boemboem

    boemboem New Member

    I'm sorry, but the mouse and the orange man aren't mine :) Only the text :D

    I wanted to make them in the same style as the orange man, after hours of staring at my pc. I don't see the trees throught the forest anymore (dutch :)) :D

    Can someone tell me if it's ok, or does it need some fixing, please be honest.
  4. tropic209

    tropic209 New Member

    I think some reflection on the words or shadowing would make it stand out more.
  5. boemboem

    boemboem New Member

  6. tropic209

    tropic209 New Member

  7. bmcoll3278

    bmcoll3278 New Member

    I think it is way better than I know how to do looks great. Can you fade from the white to grey instead of the sharp line between them?
  8. CovertPea

    CovertPea Moderator Staff Member Verified Member

    Boemboem -
    I played around with the little orange guy and made this red one in a more 'gel' style.
    The mouse drawing is from a free clipart site. (slightly modified by me)
    I've no idea how big your header should be so I just took a guess.
    Anyhow, what do you think of this?

    The MSS watermark is mine, it won't be on your copy if you decide to use it.

    Attached Files:

  9. boemboem

    boemboem New Member

    I like it very much, can you make those in various positions? I will show this one to my companion.

    BTW, did you notice the "pompebled" is red instead of orange??
  10. CovertPea

    CovertPea Moderator Staff Member Verified Member

    I had know idea what that word meant so I googled it in 'images' and found it has to do with that kidney shaped thing. What is it and does it have to be orange?

    What type of various positions do you mean?
  11. boemboem

    boemboem New Member

    no, red is the used color however orange is a better contrast with white.
    Could you make something like this??


    When it's very usefull, you might considered to be hired ;)
  12. CovertPea

    CovertPea Moderator Staff Member Verified Member

    I probably could make it.
    :confused: I need to ask though...what's the significance of a guy holding up (or hanging from) a house?
  13. boemboem

    boemboem New Member

    ;) it's the homepage, the first page of my site (index page)
  14. That is really cool!