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Websites Please Check Out my Fan site! - It's appreciated :)

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by lhotpfan, Feb 3, 2010.

  1. lhotpfan

    lhotpfan New Member

    Hey eveyone! Okay, you may think my site is pretty random(it might even bring back some memories for you lol), but could you look over my site, and give me some comments/feedback on it?(there's also a little comment box on my homepage) I'm trying to get my site more "out there" so your feedback is great!

    Thanks! :)

  2. discussourfuture

    discussourfuture New Member

    Your overall lay-out is nice and can be very calm and therefor give people more opportunity to read and watch, which is obviously the meaning of your website. You start off with a pretty large amount of text, which, from experience, I can say will very soon make your visitors leave, especially when it "appears" big. It's the full width of the site, I personally don't like the font and the lightlue header (where I think you made a small mistake while it says "<3 <3 <3"), and this amount of text could use a picture.
    Your header picture could be more bright. Again, just personal tatste.
    And, I think what you have put in your links can be fit into one page (something like biography), while some items on your homepage should have more direct links and should be organized a bit better.

    Hope this helps and all the best,


    ps I apparently clicked something and now I don't know how to shut down the horrible intro music :p
  3. navyfalcon

    navyfalcon Well-Known Member Verified Member


    You have 26 characters in you title
    Google displays 66 characters (including spaces) of your title
    You may want to add some more information (a short description)

    <meta name="description" content="Little House on the Prairie has
    captured my heart. Will it capture yours? This fan site is
    dedicated to Little House on the Prairie!" />

    You have about 133 characters in your description
    Google displays 150 characters of your description below the title
    You may want to add some more information

    You can check your keywords in a keyword tool like wordtracker
    Free keyword suggestion tool for SEO, Adwords & blogging

    What Google says about your description
    Changing your site's title and description in search results - Webmaster Tools Help
    hope this helps
  4. bryanfuller

    bryanfuller New Member

    your site looks simple and it takes time to load perhaps because of video embarked. Secondly change the theme of the site to some attractive one. all the black page looks dull.
  5. Tddun

    Tddun New Member

    One little thing I would say, is the white text and black background, I find not so easy on the eye, but it is being a bit picky.
  6. queenbee

    queenbee New Member

    Review Lil House

    Lovely idea as I loved the show! Thanks for bringing back some wonderful memories...

    The background color I suggest changing as already indicated by Bram...the header image is great...perhaps it is "stretched" a bit causing loss of vividness? I personally think changing the background will pop the header image and give a great intro to your site...

    maybe break up the text in the first three inches with one of the one still pictures from another page to keep attention in the beginning

    clean nice layout...

    you have put a lot of work into the site and it shows with your content, pics, details and videos...pat yourself on the back for a "off and running"

    One newbie to another newbie....

    This forum has the most wonderful people and give great pointers, advice and suggestions...you found the talent of the world when you found this forum...I would be lost without their continued help and support...really and truly lost...I am ever so grateful for their talent and wisdom...you will do wonderful implementing their suggestions...

    Have a great day!

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  7. Cruiseshipfan

    Cruiseshipfan New Member

    Pretty good but there is two problems. The black, Its kinda dull and boring and will make the site not as attractive to newcomers. Secondly there is two much writing straight away. A good Idea would be to break up the text and have images or video to help make it look like less writing.