Websites My Template So Far

Here is the design I've been working on [HERE]. I know its very basic but please give me the 100% truth of what you think and how I can improve.

CREDIT FOR THE BACKGROUND OF MY TEMPLATE GOES TO JAMIE WONG OF JAMIE-WONG.COM

 

Hello Dizzie92!
When i first saw your template, i said: "Wow! Cool!" It is so dynamic, expressive and original!
But after staring at it for some time my eyes got tired from the overly bright color scheme. It left my eyes strained. The abruptly changing colors attract visitors but draw their attention away from the site content.
IMHO, it would be better to stretch the site header across the template width.

Anyway, great job!
Good luck!

 

Hey Dizzie. I agree with Linx. The picture is beautiful but I don't think it's a great background for a website. The picture takes front stage when it's your content that should. Also, I'm not a big fan of links sideways (left menu). I think most people are use to a certain format, but . . . I'm all about being different so it's a toss-up.

Anyway, looks pretty, but I think that image would be better placed as a header or something.

Best of luck,

 

My Idea

What Im working on right now is putting another table in the middle. So only part of the picture will be there so it wont be so WHOA! IN YOUR FACE. Do you think that it will look better?

 

yup. That would probably work.

 

Your site’s name and slogan are important, though it’s also important to specify what kind of goods or services the site offers. It should be understood from the first sight. I liked the picture and I think it could be left the way it is now. The only thing I prefer to be added to the homepage is some information regarding site’s content.

Frankly speaking no one want to break his/her neck while looking at such buttons as “ATM Fight”, “Journals”, “History” and “Favorites” Don’t you think it will be better to place them at the top of your page? So everyone could read them in the most convenient way

These are my advices but I really liked what I see at your template!

 

I think it will be better.
Looking forward to seeing the updated template.

Good luck!

 

this would be really cool if it was a flash site.
but yeh if theres a table sort of thing in the middle which i suspect there would be this will still be pretty cool.