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Websites My 1st site...

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by kanaho, Jul 25, 2008.

  1. kanaho

    kanaho New Member

    Hi all,

    Im new here and looking for ideas to make my site better. Its my first site so I am open to abuse... let me have it! Oh by the way it was done on MS Publisher, and I have photoshop but I have no idea how to use it.

    www.aloha-communications.com

    Thank you!
    Aaron
     
    kanaho, Jul 25, 2008
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  2. pezboy45

    pezboy45 Mod/Design & Coder [Pro]

    Are you based in Hawaii?
    And, for the main text, you need to change it to black.
    I can hardly ready it.
    Otherwise pretty nice for your first.
     
    pezboy45, Jul 25, 2008
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  3. ishkey

    ishkey Moderator, Logos, Sports Crests Staff Member Verified Member

    Pezboy45 is right about the main text color. How about increasing it's font size.
    Maybe make the top header match your logo in font and color.
    Since when do they say Aloha in CA? Hey pezboy45 did you guys move the islands to the mainland.
     
    ishkey, Jul 25, 2008
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  4. pezboy45

    pezboy45 Mod/Design & Coder [Pro]

    Wait, what?
    Aloha in CA?
    I don't live in Cali.
    I live in Hawaii...
    I'm confused now...
     
    pezboy45, Jul 25, 2008
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  5. kanaho

    kanaho New Member

    there is always aloha in CA.

    especially when you are hawaiian... :)

    where in hawaii are you based out of?

    All my family is from west side of Kauai.. Kekaha
     
    kanaho, Jul 25, 2008
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  6. pezboy45

    pezboy45 Mod/Design & Coder [Pro]

    Oh, I'm in Kailua, Oahu
     
    pezboy45, Jul 25, 2008
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  7. kanaho

    kanaho New Member

    kanaho, Jul 26, 2008
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  8. ishkey

    ishkey Moderator, Logos, Sports Crests Staff Member Verified Member

    Change the font color in the header. It blends with site too much.
    “Trusted carrier-neutral telecommunications intermediary,
    ensuring the best possible solution for the best possible price”​

    How about putting in some breaks in the index page main paragraph. Say a space after each long sentence. This will make it ramble less.

    In your code you have a title section
    <title>Home</title>
    Make it this <title>Aloha Communications - Main</title>

    I would put my Google ads below and about and inch down from the menu on the left. They take away from your site. The Netfirms can stay.

    CP is right change those arrows to the ones she posted.

    Oh Yea Thanks for the larger font.
     
    ishkey, Jul 27, 2008
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  9. emilypal

    emilypal New Member

    Frankly speaking the text is a little bit difficult to read because of the grey background.
    I also recommend you to change the color of such words as Data Solutions, Hosting Solutions, etc to blue one.
    At the same time I liked your logo a lot!
     
    emilypal, Jul 28, 2008
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  10. kanaho

    kanaho New Member

    kanaho, Jul 29, 2008
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  11. pezboy45

    pezboy45 Mod/Design & Coder [Pro]

    looks good, but your bullet image isn't showing up now.
    But, instead of an image, use:
    &bull;

    That will lower the load time, because its not an image.
     
    pezboy45, Jul 29, 2008
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  12. emilypal

    emilypal New Member

    Now it's much easier to read :)
    Keep up good job!
     
    emilypal, Jul 29, 2008
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